I would imagine the disarmament clauses are a no-go for UKR.
If we had a new, sane, Russian government that had just finished nailing Putin's balls to the Kremlin's gate the proposal might be kinda workable. But with Putin still in power, or with one of his obvious successors in place, it amounts to giving him permission to try again in two years time, now with Ukraine utterly neutered...
1. Ukraine accepts neutrality without any external security guarantees... Problem is how the f*** does that stop Putin pulling the same bullshit starting this time next year?
2. Recognize the loss of Crimea... Not a ridiculous concession for Ukraine.
3. Withdrawal of Russian troops everywhere except LNR/DPR... not insane for an initial ceasefire but with point 4....
4. Referendum on LNR/DPR independence, Donbass to be completely demilitarized if staying in Ukraine wins but to remain a Russian forward operating base if independence wins... Under ideal conditions this would be a reasonable compromise but with point 3 letting the Russian army stay in place and the number of Ukrainian civilians "evacuated" to Siberia by Russia there's f*** all chance of the referendum being democratic behind Russian lines.
5. Russia must accept and show support for Ukrainian EU membership. A rather token concession and no doubt Putin's "acceptance" and "support" for Ukrainian EU membership will be horribly token while behind the scenes his minions actively work to hamper it...
6. Ukraine to cut any potential ties with NATO... combined with the neutrality with no security guarantees; Russian monkey business with UKR EU membership and the gutting of the Ukrainian military this blatantly leaves Ukraine without protection from Putin pulling his bullshit again.
7 & 8. Ukrainian military gutted, no concessions from Russia. (
Also a strong hint that the author has turned his brain to goop listening to the whole "medical research lab = bio weapons programme" bullshit...).
9. Generic point for ending any serious conflict.
10. Russia gets total get out of jail free card on the war crimes and reparations front.
11-13. All kinda generic, can't see any strong objection either way (at least assuming Russia wasn't planning on immediately trying it's bullshit again).
14. NATO to not just stop further expansion but also freezes out Finland.
15. NATO to withdraw from everything east of Germany, Russian to kinda maybe pull out of Belarus.
For a meaningful peace Ukraine needs neutrality with meaningful security guarantees (I'd say that implies immediate EU membership minimum) and any referendum in Donbass needs to happen with both Ukrainian and Russian troops withdrawn, and probably some kinda peace-keeping force in place (not gonna be European... would China or India be willign to step up?).