That essay is a good read and I do agree with its reasoning. I don't agree with the CA's action in censoring it. Yes the NZDF is not a democracy where everyone has equal rights. Some of your rights have been curtailed, but you accept that when you sign up. However your right to a fair hearing and fair treatment, is not curtailed and the CA has treated the essay's author unfairly and unjustly. What makes it even worse is the probability of the decision being politically motivated.
There is nothing wrong in the reasoning and conclusion of the essay apart from the fact that it does not fit in with the political construct that the current government is pushing upon government departments and the country. Whilst that may or may not be a valid or worthy social policy, in the case of the NZDF because of the unique service that its required to perform for the nation, the recruits should be the best regardless of ethnicity, sex, colour, creed, or whatever. They have to be because NZDF is a combat force not a team playing tiddly winks. Every individual who wears the uniform and swears the oath is dependent upon others within their units, services and NZDF for their safety and survival, more often than not in situations where pollies don't have the guts to be anywhere near.
There is nothing wrong in the reasoning and conclusion of the essay apart from the fact that it does not fit in with the political construct that the current government is pushing upon government departments and the country. Whilst that may or may not be a valid or worthy social policy, in the case of the NZDF because of the unique service that its required to perform for the nation, the recruits should be the best regardless of ethnicity, sex, colour, creed, or whatever. They have to be because NZDF is a combat force not a team playing tiddly winks. Every individual who wears the uniform and swears the oath is dependent upon others within their units, services and NZDF for their safety and survival, more often than not in situations where pollies don't have the guts to be anywhere near.